Friday, 16 August 2013

Love as a vulnerable feeling

Love is a vulnerable feeling reaching the very depth of your begin, along which of comes of comes the shakes, so be careful so your heart those not get broken, even though changing emotions always keeps the heart in place and your love in motion.
 Imagine I woke up feeling so down and my friend out of a loving heart comes in to visit me without me calling her what do you think that is of course its love. I guess what am trying to say is that love come without you know how to go about it, its like a surprise that you have to fulfil without been pushed around.

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  2. Nice read Boma, there might be a couple of typos you want to fix though.

    1) The very first Line, you repeated "of comes"
    2) "so be careful so your heart those" should be "so be careful so your heart does"
    3) "love come without you know" should be "love comes without you knowing"

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  3. tnks I will take note of that hw are you doing mr mfawa

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